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Anaesthetic by ~H-P-Lovecraft:iconH-P-Lovecraft:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Song




When I walk to you,
You say I'm too loud,
Dancing 'cross the room,
Like you're on a cloud.

Ain't nothing wrong with you,
Take the burden to me,
I will walk to you,
Like you look to me.

Put me under,
Sweet surrender,
I want to be out,
Like a light,
Feel my dreams completely,
Love me,
I want to be forever.

Turn the lights on,
Feel it move inside of you,
The dark will be expelled,
And all the demons, too.

God must exist,
I can feel him in the air,
Especially near you,
I will take care.

Put me under,
Sweet surrender,
I want to be out,
Like a light,
Feel my dreams completely,
Love me,
I want to be forever.

(solo)

Are you in this with me?
(Sweet surrender)

Hold my hand until I die.
(Like a light)

Be my dream forever.
(Love me)

I want to be forever!

Put me under,
Sweet surrender,
I want to be out,
Like a light,
Feel my dreams completely,
Love me,
I want to be...

Put me under,
You're with me,
I want to be (with you)
Like a light,
Substitute my new reality,
Love me,
I want to be forever.
©2006-2010 ~H-P-Lovecraft
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Author's Comments

I'm going on a road trip to Anaheim at 4:00 A.M, (one hour) so I decided to finish and post this little gem for you. Enjoy.

Side-Note: The original title to this song was Chloroform.

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~AmiFire Nov 24, 2006, 12:36:09 PM
Woooooow. Thats so beautiful!

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あなたはばかですか。 xD
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~H-P-Lovecraft Nov 26, 2006, 11:23:52 AM
Thank you very much. :+fav: much appreciated.

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~~My Poems> [link] <My Poems~~
God is a stand-up comedian to an audience which is too afraid to laugh.
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~AmiFire Nov 26, 2006, 1:34:34 PM
You really write beautiful poems. D: You should write a book and get it published! When you write enough I mean.

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あなたはばかですか。 xD
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~H-P-Lovecraft Nov 27, 2006, 11:04:06 AM
What, you don't think 120 poems is enough to get published in a book?

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~~My Poems> [link] <My Poems~~
God is a stand-up comedian to an audience which is too afraid to laugh.
:iconamifire:
~AmiFire Nov 27, 2006, 5:15:19 PM
Uh...................no?

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あなたはばかですか。 xD
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~H-P-Lovecraft Nov 27, 2006, 9:55:15 PM
Er...umm...Argh.

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~~My Poems> [link] <My Poems~~
God is a stand-up comedian to an audience which is too afraid to laugh.
:iconamifire:
~AmiFire Nov 28, 2006, 5:41:55 AM
^^;

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あなたはばかですか。 xD
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~Sporenza Nov 29, 2006, 12:26:51 AM
Don't take this the wrong way, but I miss your poetry. Song and poetry has a difference that I just can't place.

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
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~H-P-Lovecraft Nov 29, 2006, 12:38:44 AM
Don't worry, I've been working on a slightly more cheerful holiday poem lately. Should be up a week or so before Christmas.

The difference is probably the fact that song is usually restricted to a chorus and a certain pattern that isn't easily manipulated. Poetry is more free-flowing, but harder to put music to.

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~~My Poems> [link] <My Poems~~
God is a stand-up comedian to an audience which is too afraid to laugh.
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